Tuesday 24 June 2014

Cooking With Action Verbs

This term's writing lessons have been really positive, every day we have been writing we have learned lots of different things like narratives, recipes and making our writing as interesting as we could. We have focused on different aspects of writing and looked at different videos, websites and online tools to help us.

I have really enjoyed writing with Miss French. I feel my writing has improved so much, also I really enjoy writing where I used to hate it. When my teacher said "Get your books out it's writing time," I really never wanted to do it. I'm looking forward to next's term's writing! By Ryan Robertson







Wednesday 11 June 2014




For two weeks we have been focusing on making writing more interesting by choosing carefully the verbs we use.

Learning Objective:
  • To use action verbs effectively to create a visual in a readers mind
To do this we:
  • Watched and critiqued cooking videos for action verb ideas
  • Compiled a list of great action verbs to use in our writing
  • Cooked something delicious - Nachos
  • Took photos of our cooking to inspire our writing
  • Then we wrote an 'action verb' rich recipe
















Monday 2 June 2014

I have made an advert for the monster I created on beast blender.
I have been sick for a while and have missed out on some things in writing but I am really looking forward to making scrumptious nachos on Thursday. We will be focusing on action verbs. Taylor.


This week we are going to be cooking nachos looking at action verbs, last week we created an advert for our monster, here is mine. Anthony.


Had an awesome week we made an ad for my monster.

AMAZING WEEK!!Finished ad for my monster!!
TAKE A LOOK. ZARA.